Saturday, January 19, 2008

Creature of Darkness




There, that is my darkness
Solitude that I call my own
Yet so naively I gave it to her
Like an undaunted, discarded breath;
A fearless prayer.

In here I hide
In the sanctuary of the obscure
In my cocoon, I sense the impulsion.

No, there is no solace
No undoing that tears her open.
To have selfishly yearned,
To have abandoned myself to wanton lust ,
I feel the faithful sweetness of emancipation overflow my lungs

There, there in my darkness
Inside my bloodless dwelling
Are my own melancholy madness and unfounded sensations.

This is where I will rediscover her
Within her ancient eyes
This is where she will return when the twilight wanes
When her teardrops douse me in insatiable flames
This, here in my darknessā€¦.

20 Comments:

At 8:11 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Good to have you back ! Very long time....
and brilliant! You can paint on people's minds....

-L

 
At 4:11 AM, Blogger WHAT'S IN A NAME ? said...

loved the last stanza.

 
At 4:39 AM, Anonymous Willy baba said...

Indeed i could see the poem... Nice! :)

Willy baba

 
At 5:13 PM, Blogger September said...

selfishly yearned,abandoned myself to wanton lust ... I feel the faithful sweetness of emancipation overflow my lungs

I really like these lines. I kept reading them over and over... And the pictures you choose - always so mesmerizing.

very nice, Blade.

I too am glad you are back. :)

 
At 8:41 PM, Blogger Keshi said...

simply beautiful!

within darkness too sometimes we can find light..the way we never expect to.

Keshi

 
At 7:57 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

emancipation...in lust
you are still the same aren't you?
So found that "one woman" or still single? :)

anwesha

 
At 5:43 AM, Blogger The Belled Goat said...

Heya, Thanks for dropping by.
Hope to see yah again.

And about your work : I sense perfection...!!
How I love that accompanying pic, it couldn't have been more appropriate!

And the poem, its so beautiful... each word seems like put there with a purpose ...
" faithful sweetness of emancipation "
Greatest ever!

 
At 12:27 PM, Blogger The Mocking Spirit said...

Welcome back.

Finally! I couldnt be gladder!

 
At 4:25 AM, Blogger Katie McKenna said...

very intense !

Thank you!

 
At 7:14 AM, Blogger Margie said...

Thanks for your visit to my blog, and your kind words!
It's nice to be here and read your
poem.

Wonderful lines...
This is where she will return when the twilight wanes
When her teardrops douse me in insatiable flames


Good work!
Thank you!

Margie

 
At 12:05 PM, Blogger Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

This is quite beautiful. Sadness and happiness inside the darkness. Lovely.

 
At 2:08 PM, Blogger Anna Piutti said...

Thank you so much for commenting on my blog.

Your writings are truly breathcatching!

Best Regards,

Anna

 
At 6:07 AM, Blogger The Belled Goat said...

Thanx, I'll keep coming here too.
Would add yah in the "Other introspections" on mah blog if u don't mind?

 
At 7:06 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Lovely ,fantastic,I agree with the others that you do and can paint on people's minds

when do you go global?

 
At 12:58 AM, Anonymous airbus 300 said...

how i wish....just like this poem..the darkness would disappear..the creatures of the night would stop over powering me.. the pain shall subside..n i shall be yours...once again...

 
At 10:43 PM, Blogger dreamy said...

you have been blogrolled :P

 
At 9:21 AM, Blogger Paradox Phillic said...

Beautiful picture (couldnt take my eyes off it) ... and beautiful words!!

 
At 3:25 AM, Blogger zoram said...

nice photo, beautiful scribbling :)
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At 9:38 PM, Blogger Ruth said...

I recently came across your blog and have been reading along. I thought I would leave my first comment. I don't know what to say except that I have enjoyed reading. Nice blog. I will keep visiting this blog very often.


Ruth

http://www.infrared-sauna-spot.info

 
At 10:44 AM, Anonymous sreemanti said...

dark and enlightening...

 

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