Creature of Darkness
There, that is my darkness
Solitude that I call my own
Yet so naively I gave it to her
Like an undaunted, discarded breath;
A fearless prayer.
In here I hide
In the sanctuary of the obscure
In my cocoon, I sense the impulsion.
No, there is no solace
No undoing that tears her open.
To have selfishly yearned,
To have abandoned myself to wanton lust ,
I feel the faithful sweetness of emancipation overflow my lungs
There, there in my darkness
Inside my bloodless dwelling
Are my own melancholy madness and unfounded sensations.
This is where I will rediscover her
Within her ancient eyes
This is where she will return when the twilight wanes
When her teardrops douse me in insatiable flames
Yet so naively I gave it to her
Like an undaunted, discarded breath;
A fearless prayer.
In here I hide
In the sanctuary of the obscure
In my cocoon, I sense the impulsion.
No, there is no solace
No undoing that tears her open.
To have selfishly yearned,
To have abandoned myself to wanton lust ,
I feel the faithful sweetness of emancipation overflow my lungs
There, there in my darkness
Inside my bloodless dwelling
Are my own melancholy madness and unfounded sensations.
This is where I will rediscover her
Within her ancient eyes
This is where she will return when the twilight wanes
When her teardrops douse me in insatiable flames
This, here in my darkness….
posted by lightmatic @ 7:52 PM
20 Comments:
Good to have you back ! Very long time....
and brilliant! You can paint on people's minds....
-L
loved the last stanza.
Indeed i could see the poem... Nice! :)
Willy baba
selfishly yearned,abandoned myself to wanton lust ... I feel the faithful sweetness of emancipation overflow my lungs
I really like these lines. I kept reading them over and over... And the pictures you choose - always so mesmerizing.
very nice, Blade.
I too am glad you are back. :)
simply beautiful!
within darkness too sometimes we can find light..the way we never expect to.
Keshi
emancipation...in lust
you are still the same aren't you?
So found that "one woman" or still single? :)
anwesha
Heya, Thanks for dropping by.
Hope to see yah again.
And about your work : I sense perfection...!!
How I love that accompanying pic, it couldn't have been more appropriate!
And the poem, its so beautiful... each word seems like put there with a purpose ...
" faithful sweetness of emancipation "
Greatest ever!
Welcome back.
Finally! I couldnt be gladder!
very intense !
Thank you!
Thanks for your visit to my blog, and your kind words!
It's nice to be here and read your
poem.
Wonderful lines...
This is where she will return when the twilight wanes
When her teardrops douse me in insatiable flames
Good work!
Thank you!
Margie
This is quite beautiful. Sadness and happiness inside the darkness. Lovely.
Thank you so much for commenting on my blog.
Your writings are truly breathcatching!
Best Regards,
Anna
Thanx, I'll keep coming here too.
Would add yah in the "Other introspections" on mah blog if u don't mind?
Lovely ,fantastic,I agree with the others that you do and can paint on people's minds
when do you go global?
how i wish....just like this poem..the darkness would disappear..the creatures of the night would stop over powering me.. the pain shall subside..n i shall be yours...once again...
you have been blogrolled :P
Beautiful picture (couldnt take my eyes off it) ... and beautiful words!!
nice photo, beautiful scribbling :)
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dark and enlightening...
Thank you for posting.
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